Chris brown

Ok tried less c4d spam than with humanoid, i cant find a good enough render to make a colour sig so b&w again

http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/646...ownc4dcopy.png

Elements are overcontrasted and the lighting is too strong emnating from the focal. Work more on the contrast and lighting. I like the arraign of elements and how you used the B&W. Nice technique there Keep at it!

thanks :D

The focal just doesn't look right to me
I the the c4ds are over powering, too many used imo,
kiu