Mythology

http://img276.echo.cx/img276/8175/night057in.jpg

http://img191.echo.cx/img191/1205/night0522xb.jpg

I put more work than most into this an just wanted some good ideas on what it needs.

Meah. It's average. I dont like the white bars on the top and bottom going through the render. Also the render needs to be blended a bit more.

http://img191.echo.cx/img191/1205/night0522xb.jpg

Hows this changed it a bit. Could you tell me what parts of the render need to be blended?

Well. I feel the the left side is a bit to bold. Also the head is too. I liked the white bars you had at first...just dont allow it to go through the render. Im not so sure about the japanese symbol.

I like the top one a lot more than the second one, it really looks nice. The biggest problem I have with it is that the text doesnt fit at all, and doesnt really look right. Almost like its too blurry, or somthing.

Try changing the font - possibly to something more gothic. Nice job though.

Yea, the fonts need work. The scanlines are a little too bold. The render needs blended a tad. The symbol is good, but doesnt realy fit what with the outer glow. Also idk if its a bit too dark.

Font changes

http://img278.echo.cx/img278/7391/night0523la.jpg

Hows this?

I like the new font for mythology and the old font or a different one for the quote :P.