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too much text
the blue is kinda odd looking
Not coming up for me?/
The small text should go, and you shouldn't put text in the corner takes away from the focal, I think if you added some blue in the foreground it would look better.
Too much text. Don't make the text overwhelm the focal. I do like your assortment of colors and the way how you used the effects. The composition, excluding the text is fine. Keep at it!
ok thx ^_^
It's coming up now but I can't hardly read the text nevermind too much of it.
some nice effects, i like the 'wind' effect.
kiu
