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The pentool does not fit. Remove the "X" character. I really like the atmosphere in this piece and the use of the small fine texture. Its sweet! Clean around the focal a bit there. Also, I think it can be improved and if you utilize lighting here and correctly as well. I think a contrast increase can help too. Keep at it!
The "X" is really annoying, remove it.
But i love the feel to the tag.
Erase the Fx of the focal though
:)
agree with shiv and takken, the 'X' ruins it a lil bit . but other than that it has a nice feel to it
:D
Thanks guys, made a v2.
Awesome man, love the flow and the feel to it, KIU.
I really like it although I feel some parts are oversharpened.
that girl seems like she would be hot
