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can I see stock + Render?
it looks alright but I don't like the left hand side where it suddenly goes black and white.
keep up the work.
I like the lighting and effects. Really interesting elements in the piece. Work some tones on the contrast mate. I think it could help a lot more. THe BG betweent he gear effect and focal seems too congested though and is a bit distracting. Lessen the interaction in that area. Keep at it!