v1
http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/462/pheon1.jpg
v2
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/1706/pheon2.jpg
v3
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/6389/pheon3.jpg
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feels abit too monotone for me work on the lighting too :) v3 is better imo
Really like the texture of the piece. I think the text needs to go. Also, it is monotoned. Work on the color scheme and contrast. Keep at it!
Add some more colour it is monotone atm.
I ain't liking the text on this one.
looking decent overall though, kiu