Cooking Keys

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first version is better for my liking because I ain't liking the amount of colours everywhere.

I like the effects mate.

kiu

Again, try smoothing out your effects. Lookin' too rough and chaotic still. Also, your blending is an issue of those effects you use. Work on it some more. Keep at it!