Venom

http://i50.tinypic.com/t7nc4k.png

Lose the border, crop the sides the lighting looks a bit forced and the sig's monotone you should probably add some green fx in there

http://i46.tinypic.com/2igcn.png

I added the green but it did not look good. I resized it a little. Is it better?

i think the first one was alright.. your effects on this one look a lot better but could be blended a little better.. depth is pretty nice.. and like i said before.. Lighting on OVERLAY!! :)
Keep at it man has some good potential

I like it better jus work on the lighting

http://i50.tinypic.com/30hudqg.png

That better?

Mm.. lookin better, maybe lower the opacity to half and double the layer so you get a more light color look

Thanks for all the help Don.

I think the smaller version is better because of the amount of the black space. Theres too much although I like the lighting on the piece.

kiu

By smaller do you mean smaller left to right or smaller up and down? Because I like it smaller up and down.