Iron Man

I like this one, prefer with text :)

Text version:
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h2...ronMantext.png

No Text
http://i67.photobucket.com/albums/h2...nMannotext.png

cnc please! :)

to bit lighten, but nice work kiu

To much light you mean mate?

thanks. :)

yes to much light) *

i think hes russian marioman
buttttt yeah there is a bit too much lighting going on
i dont like the text on v1 so i gotta go with v2

i like the one with no text more, the text on the other one ruins the whole signature.

Try a Text placing Tut out maybe?

The text placement is ok.
And thijs' your text in your sig is worse...
Ontopic.
I dont know if its part of the render but that white in the middle of his chest doesnt look good.
The c4ds don't add flow.
And you need a light source.

The light on his chest is the render, I just made a lil brighter and added the lines to give the effect.

it's hard to place the text without it being hard to read lol.

Thanks for the comments. :)

Can't really discern the effects at the bottom. I think the lighting is too strong and there is little contrast. The arraign of the elements provides a poor composition and I think the effects to the right are too soft. Make them sharper and harsher. Work on your overall blending, lighting, contrast and composition. Keep at it!

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Originally Posted by Wizdum

The text placement is ok.
And thijs' your text in your sig is worse...
Ontopic.
I dont know if its part of the render but that white in the middle of his chest doesnt look good.
The c4ds don't add flow.
And you need a light source.

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I whas talking About THE PLACING of the text not about the Text himself. becouse the text himself is even harder to have.

Omg?? u DON'T know Iron Man? ;p