Finish HIM!!!!!

V1:
http://img295.imageshack.us/img295/3471/raiden.png
V2:
http://img97.imageshack.us/img97/3156/raidene.png

Still trying to find my style...
What do you think?
C'n'C please

To oversharpened..
Nice C4D placing, (they are C4D rigth?)
Good looking render to but becouse its oversharpened it looks choppy..

3/5

Renders don't look that good on the side. If you added some more effects and placed the c4ds in a nice position at screen it would look better. Also add some photofilters and gradient maps.

I think it's hard to see the render.

nice c4ds. kiu

Focal seems a bit sharpened too much and stretched. Its also hard to discern him because of the color scheme and lighting; the lighting is too harsh. Also the arraign of elements and variation are too inconsisntent and lack any form good composition as a result. The color schematics are oversaturated and overbrightened. Use more subtle colors to introduce contrast. Work on your color scheme, lighting, and composition. Keep at it!

Version 2?

no flow, not a good depth, lighting needs work, render and background do not blend and its way too oversharpend it herts my eyes but keep trying you will get there some day

v2. already looks better.

Still over sharpened.

v2s color scheme is very weird
just change the lighting on v1 and make it flow