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its nice man i like the colors and the flow you have here but i dont like the effects on top of the boarder and also i dont like the 1 side boader at all good work man keep it up
Lol I didnt even realise that c4d over the border. I added a quick touch up and i forgot to put it under the border lol. Thanks.
amazing flow mate
Thanks.
By all of you guys comments so far I must be getting better :)
Lighting = Win :)
c4d's look pretty good.. maybe some clipping mask could add to the flow some
but pretty good tag man :)
keep it up
The effects color tones are too burnt. While the general flow is good, the actual composition of those effects itself are not. They need to be arraigned properly. Also the lighting is too harsh and the color schematics are edging on a monochromatic scale. I think the BG can do with more elements of interest as a way to introduce better contrast and much more fitting color scheme. Try introducing a texture, that might help:) Work on your blending. Keep at it!
I like the effects but it seems gloomy.
good work kiu