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honestly thats reallyyyyy good
i love the fxxxxx
nice but i dont like how the c4d goes over the edge of cudis face
The text doesn't fit, but its an improvement mate. I like the C4Ds you used and I think their positioning is better than your last one. However pay attention to the color schematic and blending. its not blended too good. The BG is not adjusted enough or its not consistent with the focal and I find some elements in it distracting such as the red light for example. Work on your composition. Keep at it!
Text isn't very nice in this piece also the jacket doesn't look right on the dude.
The background doesn't suit the render&c4d.
Keep up the work though, It's a good job.
