Breakfree from the Venom

Dont know what i quite think of this,

C&C

http://img571.imageshack.us/img571/8771/venomcopy.png

Remove the text. I the colors leading FROM the neck a bit further down have a nice blend but at the top it is really harsh and does not fit. In some areas of the neck or w.e it is it is overcontrasted. I think the effects to the right don't fit. I think the color scheme is alright but you need to be aware of some of the colors in the spectrum. Keep at it!

And stop with the pretty borders. You want ot be a good sig maker? If you look at the 'pro' sigs everyone adores, they use standard borders, or fuck, none. All you do when you create those type of borders is create more unnecessary, negative space which is distracting.

Border = Eghh :(

Oversharpened, render is too big imo.

Not loving this one mate but keep up the work.

k just thought id try something weird wasnt really a seriouse peice