dont shoot :(

v1:
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/6098/guna.png
v2:
http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/3152/gunv2.png

C'N'C PLOX

forgot to make text layer visible in v2 ^^ my bad

nigh on the text

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nigh on the text

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Thats it for your C'n'C????
thanks?

The lighting is off. I find the elements tbehind the focal to be too chaotic, inconsisntent in terms of variables and the color blending is a bit off. The shapes simply do not go with the C4D. Seems a bit ugly in contrast and the text doesn't fit. Also, the BG looks choppy, oversharpeneed and stuff. Work on your composition. Keep at it!

Whats wrong with the composition?

Remove text imo and change the grey background to something else, it's seems boring imo.

Also the arrows behind the render seem choppy. Good work tough, maybe put some effects over the render to blend more?

Kiu mate, you really are improving :)