http://i47.tinypic.com/1zcfmex.jpg
First sig back in like, 5 months? CnC
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http://i47.tinypic.com/1zcfmex.jpg
First sig back in like, 5 months? CnC
really like this can i see the stock?
Remove the text. I find the lighting too be excessively overwhelming and no work on the contrast. Needs more contrast and firm color scheme for the lighting to hold a positive effect. Also work on adding minor elements to the piece. Work on your lighting. Keep at it!
The text stands out WAY to much atm, remove or find a better place to put it imo;
I think the signature is too bright atm, too many light sources - it's like a huge outer glow on the render.
Nevertheless, awesome for your first.