latest sig (remember i am a noob xD)

http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...x1/ichigo3.png
please criticize :D

Text = no go.

Nice job but again, you need to stop putting so many effects over the render and make it pop out more.

The effects on his hand are cool though.

good work mate, kiu

remove some fx and get rid of the text
work on your text

Basically everything they said. All the effects on top washes out the render and gives it very little contrast. Text obviously needs work. Keep trying, you'll get it right.