somehting...;o

http://i45.tinypic.com/25k35m1.png

i got bored.. so i tried something new

I've been a fan of zemotion's work ever since forever!
I like the grungy feel you created through smudging. However, the right side is too empty.
Perhaps add some text there?
Also, the red kinda clashes with the stock.

Nice texture of the smudge. I would lveo to see mroe smudge elements in the right and increase the lighting. The focal is a tad too dark though. Increase the color tones. Keep at it!

nice smudging and filter use?

anyway, it is lacking depth badly and the right is the focal as much as the main focal.

Tone down some sharpness+blur parts to add depth and this would be a great piece.

KIU

thanks a lot, i will correct it tomorrow or i dont know..^^

yea, smuding and filter use