Spideer mannn

http://s004.radikal.ru/i205/1007/eb/160d77b9fccd.png

the effects are really random,

i think it needs a little clean up but it's quite good,

kiu

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Originally Posted by bcfcant

the effects are really random,

i think it needs a little clean up but it's quite good,

kiu

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r u kiu from pspgweber? ur an asshole,
but im with you this time (:

kiu = keep it up

your c4ds are misplaced, work on composition and flow. Too chaotic for me.

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Originally Posted by nasty_shinto

r u kiu from pspgweber? ur an asshole,
but im with you this time (:

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failz and yes... too messy bro

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Originally Posted by nasty_shinto

r u kiu from pspgweber? ur an asshole,
but im with you this time (:

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Never heard of pspgweber lolz

The composition seems too random. No definitive effects and the smudge is just too out of placed. The composition needs to be more consistent and more definitive. It lacks those two right now.

Nice depth and blending,but the fx seems to me a little busy.Overall though you did a good job m8.

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Originally Posted by bcfcant

Never heard of pspgweber lolz

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lolz, its a psp board