So much is wrong idgw

So I decided to experiment with stuff I lack on.

Such as effect placement. (especially c4d) and smudging, which I completely suck at. Though, the smudge isn't obvious in the tag.

http://i49.tinypic.com/651pxd.png

So yeah, here it is. Idk what more to add to it asides from text.
I'm still not satisfied, and I don't really sense much improvement from this.

I think it's near one of your best if you carried on with more effects.

Try changing the background to a stock then blur it, that should make it look better.

KIU, good to see you experimenting!