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looks a little chaotic,and needs more flow. maybe more blending? kiu
Liquid is right, needs more blending. The sudden shift from stock to the blurry BG is too much. Not feeling the stroke on the text, either. I generally find that stroked text looks really amaturish. Not really liking the blurry smudging on his chest either.
Not too bad overall, though. I like where you're going with this.
theres too much blur imo.
use a normal stock for a background in this one.
