Halo wars

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That is some hawt fx going on there. However, I think you should blur a bit of the sides, because you can easy lose your focal point from that. Also, I usually do not advice g- map, but I think the tag would look sick with g- map. Perhaps a warm tone like purple and orange.
That's all.
I think this tag is amazing.

Kinda bland, if you ask me. Needs more color, and something else to focus on, other than the stock/render. Your transition from light to dark around the stock are too sudden, should be more subtle (particularly at the top-right of your stock)

thx for the advice

great effects there but insert a background imo mate, also try to make the render pop out more.

nice work.