I know its not great, but hopefully you guys can offer some tips and advice on how to improve it.
btw decided to go textless for now as my text sucks.
http://i30.tinypic.com/2iv08pk.jpg
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I know its not great, but hopefully you guys can offer some tips and advice on how to improve it.
btw decided to go textless for now as my text sucks.
http://i30.tinypic.com/2iv08pk.jpg
Some stuff you need to improve on:
- I like the fx, bit it lacks a but on flow due to the right side. Its going criss cross in a uniform/ patterned manner. o_o
- The color of the fx doesn't really fit the background and focal point.
- I think you went a little over board with the topaz tool.
- Overall, the feel of the tag is a little chaotic and messy.
What I like:
I like how you did the lighting! Also, as I've mentioned before, the use of fx is nice and the left side blends in pretty well with the focal point. Keep it up.
the right side is kinda offsetting
just that one little line of fx going to the right disturbs the whole flow for me and i dont like the colors much either :/
Need to work on the flow and lighting. KIU.
Ok, thanks for the comments and advice guys.
Good work but remove topaz imo mate.
