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The BG needs more work on. its too chaotic right now, also the the effects need better blending. I like the color but its a tad too harsh in some areas and the effects at the right don't fit. Causes loss of focus. Text needs a different font but legible still. Your making improvement. Keep at it!
Very Messy
Fx are alirght But could be blending better like takken said
Erase the Fx off the focal for example the white thing of his shoulder
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Not really any flow here
I like the idea of the tag that your going for but work on the composition and execution
Keep at it
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