slash sig

i looked at some tut's n stuff
and i came out with this :
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...gx1/slashf.png
criticize please

and yes i know i am terrible at text in general ¬__¬

i really like it but its a little blurry..

I think the smudge in terms of color and composition is a tad too messy and has no consistency. Its too random. In some areas its strong, in some areas its too weak. The lighting is too strong. I think flashes of red elements in the left side don't fit and the text is illegible. Work on your composition mate and try to be consistent.