Halo'd

http://i28.tinypic.com/nfnxwi.png
V2
http://i30.tinypic.com/21jrwar.png
V3
http://i25.tinypic.com/no6lvt.png
V4
http://i27.tinypic.com/2gw56hx.png
what do you think?

mm i'd like v2 if you put a contrast layer over it. plus you might wanna try different text. Nice smudging tho kiu

v2 if you lowered the opacity down a bit and make it not so bright.

Text removed and i added two layers of contrast to it

http://i25.tinypic.com/no6lvt.png

i like it alot now but i was fine with the text:)

I don't think there is much going for the sig... It's just too plain.

Nice and simple, has that kinda dreamy effect... v2's good

nice smudging man!

Nice smudge but it needs a more consistent texture and flow. The lighting would be better if it weren't so harsh mate as well. I don't think the text is bad but it could be better. Work on your compo. Keep at it!

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Originally Posted by Bieber Glee

Nice smudge but it needs a more consistent texture and flow. The lighting would be better if it weren't so harsh mate as well. I don't think the text is bad but it could be better. Work on your compo. Keep at it!

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when you say composition.. which is in 98% of your feed back haha what do you mean? it confuses me