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C&C plz :D
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http://i32.tinypic.com/ok2zyg.png
C&C plz :D
Nobody? ;(
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The text is not really nice. Put it closer to focal point and delete the translate. It is not really good finished. But it's a good idea.
Theres a lot of pieces on the pentool that disappear lol? maybe your erased it, buti see where your trying to go and maybe a little less pentool because its really messy and add some sense of flow to it. the green goes really well with the stock so id keep that :)
Nice pentooling but there is too much space that isn't being usd properly and some just looks messy. I would add in some shapes like spheres in there to improve the composition. Also its too big so you can't manipulate that space properly either so yeah, crop it yo. Text needs to go.
