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too mono... green is an ugly color on its own... try to mix it up ...also drop the borders... BG stock looks pretty low quality in comparison to the fore ground render.... lighting is pretty out of sync...ur pixel dust/c4d light dots look too big also... and get rid of the text.. seems unnecessary and takes attention away from the focal