Yes i am new to this website and i was wondering if someone could tell me how this looks...
http://img832.imageshack.us/img832/8443/raphaele.png
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07-20-2010, 01:54 AMNecrothalassNew Member,New Sig
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07-20-2010, 02:39 AMSpardaa
Text, face sharpless...
hmmm 7/10 ;) -
07-20-2010, 03:39 AMcc.RadillacVIII
Hello and welcome!
You got some nice smudgeing going on but the right side is to empty. Keep smudgeing some in the background to fill up the empty space. It is very monotone and colorless, try spice it up by adding some colors to it. The texts is ok but the placement is not the best, on the right side under his arm would be a better position.
Keep working on it, doing great so far ;) -
07-20-2010, 04:06 AMVicious ZenQuote:
Originally Posted by Spardaa
Am I the only one who thinks this doesn't make any sense?
Pretty bland, dude. Too much negative space, not enough color. Cool effects, I dig the bottom part especially. On the head and collar, some of the outlines are too sharp. Text could use some work too, I'd play with that some more if I were you. Maybe try using the same effect you did on the stock on the text? -
07-20-2010, 04:18 AMNecrothalassWell i agree but everyone has to get that the colors were made like that on purpose.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicious Zen
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07-20-2010, 05:48 AMVicious Zen
Whether they were made that way on purpose or not, it doesn't mean it looks good. Especially with that much negative space, it's very plain.
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07-20-2010, 08:51 PMNecrothalassYou could use some practice yourself.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vicious Zen
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07-20-2010, 09:28 PMchonfat
too much negative space, too sharpen and text needs some work... i would suggest going to tuts and try out them out it will help u a lot
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07-20-2010, 11:54 PMVicious ZenI could, I'm incredibly rusty. But that's not what we're talking about here, we're talking about your work. If you're afraid of negative feedback, don't post.Quote:
Originally Posted by Delite
