DeadSpace 2

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Doesn't like the colors and the white lines. It's to light and your text is hard to read in my opinum.
Keep it up,

i dont like the lines going around his body and a little to bright and blurry

I think the brightness and colors and colors dont really fit the theme of deadspace.

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Originally Posted by Sontifx

I think the brightness and colors and colors dont really fit the theme of deadspace.

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And that's what being an artist is all about!

Is being an artist asking for replies and then not listening to advice?

Ok I dont like this all that much, u over worked the render, to a point i had to look at it for 5 min to understand WHAT the render was, if u are creating something abstract and totally different from dead space then great job, but if u where looking to edit dead space into a sig, ahh then that needs work, just tooo much edited :P

I second what everyone else has said, it's too bright and when I first looked at it I couldn't tell what was going on at all.
Text is way to light and hard to see try dimming it down.
Really just use a brightness and contrast on it and it will look a lot better.

Yes being an artist is all about using your own artistic liscence and imagination but it is also about always trying to improve your work and trying out new styles all the time. Nobodies work is ever perfect but we all post our work on forums like these because we are always trying to get better.
When you post your work on this site you are asking for CnC even if you don't actually ask for it yourself in your thread, CnC meants and comment AND criticism. People take time to look at your work and then make comments based on what they think would best improve it so don't brush them away because you think being an artist means your work will always be right.

Bit of a sermon there :P but honestly if you won't take the comments and criticism from others there is really no point in posting.

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Originally Posted by RunningMan

Is being an artist asking for replies and then not listening to advice?

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That wasn't advice he was saying it didn't fit deadspace and i was saying these colors look badass regardless of the darkness in dead space :o

im not really sure what im looking at here lighting is way too OTT
The colours are sweet regardless of whether its deadspace or not pen tool feels a bit out of place also