Graffiti :D

First graffiti pieces. still amateur in that stuff :D
Scanner is smaller than my sketchbook so sorry for the cutoff.
Used Permenant markers
Wanted to use it on my skateboard, but meh :P

http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...c_Majinbuu.jpg


http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...c_Majinbuu.jpg


http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...c_Majinbuu.jpg

Right idea, but your lines are REALLY shaky, work on drawing simpler stuff before you do the complicated lettering, like the second :)

i suggest first using a ruler with a penicl to sketch your lines. then use a fine tip sharpie and trace over it. then finish it off with a bigger marker for the shadows. after that you can incorporate different colors your designs are pretty cool but it looks poorly drawn and cluttered

You should also start pushing your letters to do more. Think of them less as a whole part, and more as each individual line makes up the letter. For example, the letter A can be divided into three parts, each line on the side, and the line connecting them in the middle. Now, how could you stretch those out to be more interesting, hmm... That's basically the kind of approach I've taken to graffiti work, and it's allowed me to come out with some pretty sweet shapes, and designs. Look at stuff by other writers and you'll see what I mean.
As it stands now, all your letters are really plain. And yeah, your lines need to be clean up some.

thanks for the tips guys.i will keep them in mind

i have no idea what it says =/
i have seen alot of graffiti but i was never able to read it


WHY CANT I READ GRAFFITI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(for real what do they say)