Disturbed

this is 1 i made using a tut by kid buu it didnt work like i wanted it to but that might be bc i got lost during the tut lol btw c&c

http://i386.photobucket.com/albums/o...isturbedv2.jpg


v2
http://i386.photobucket.com/albums/o...isturbedv3.jpg

resized completely re done and still im getting the emptiness problem

v3
http://i386.photobucket.com/albums/o...isturbedv4.jpg

took out a step to make it less bright

First thing is I think either the sig is too big or the render is too small, there's too much empty space around.

The bg is a bit hectic as well, I would try and tone that down a bit as well as try and blend your render.

The text isn't bad but with that much empty space I think the placement could be better.

Make sure you keep reading tuts and keep practicing and you will improve in no time.

The sharply cut C4D/effect/thing on the right and far left of the render makes it look, um... I forgot the word but it stands out too much.

Also, the pattern at the top is repetitive and, in all honesty, a little bit boring.

And also, what the above cnc said. the render is nowhere near as exaggerated as it should be, and the background (and foreground) is far too vibrant and sharp.

I really want to say something nice. I'm sorry.

its ok u dont have to be nice being harsh makes me improve 10X faster than nice comments