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I'd try and bring out the yellows a little more, and I'd definitely drop the stroke on the text. I'd sharpen up the smudging in a couple places, particularily right next to your stock too. Good work though, just needs some tweaking.
nice sigs, add a different text darkened the edges and do you play guild wars ?
i know he dont)