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I hate the text. The C4D is pretty fricken cool as well as the effect around it. The background could be better. A light source would be good. And the render looks kinda blurry. Not back though. :D
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Give the text some perspective, and tone it down a little, then maybe it could work, but right now it sticks out too much. I'd also say this one could really, really benefit from some more color. Other than that, not too bad. Stock is a little low quality. C4d render is sweet though.
