Sakura WIP

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08-07-2010, 03:45 PM
theclan10

Sakura WIP

Hey guys, this a WIP of me Drawing + Coloring Sakura.

http://i37.tinypic.com/15dmbti.jpg

It still has a long way too go but i want some cnc's on how to improve what i've got so far:)
08-07-2010, 03:57 PM
Gallagher

You're going to have to define your brush strokes, it looks like you're using a low hardness brush which is good in some cases, but the details look blurry because of this. You may have actually planned to detail with a harder brush later on, but as of right now that's all I can really critique since you mentioned you have a long ways to go yet.
The line work is good, just begin detailing soon and keep us updated, it looks great thus far. Just going to add that there may be a bit too much shading, looks a tad bit dark imo.
08-07-2010, 04:00 PM
theclan10

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gallagher

You're going to have to define your brush strokes, it looks like you're using a low hardness brush which is good in some cases, but the details look blurry because of this. You may have actually planned to detail with a harder brush later on, but as of right now that's all I can really critique since you mentioned you have a long ways to go yet.
The line work is good, just begin detailing soon and keep us updated, it looks great thus far. Just going to add that there may be a bit too much shading, looks a tad bit dark imo.

The parts that you mentioned are true indeed but i knew them already hehe thanks for that anyways.
As for the darkness i want her to be in a dark area with just 1 light source thats why it's so dark. unfortunately i suck at making backgrounds so i'll be planning to do that at the last part.

Thanks appreciated!
08-07-2010, 09:39 PM
Gallagher

Quote:

Originally Posted by theclan10

The parts that you mentioned are true indeed but i knew them already hehe thanks for that anyways.
As for the darkness i want her to be in a dark area with just 1 light source thats why it's so dark. unfortunately i suck at making backgrounds so i'll be planning to do that at the last part.

Thanks appreciated!

Yeah I figured. As I mentioned before, it's looking great thus far, can't wait to see the finished outcome.