Meh

Meh, this one is alright. I made it for a SOTW, the theme was sports.

http://i36.tinypic.com/sn1eyt.png

CnC?

Yeah, I know. The text looks crap, so don't comment on that :p.

I think there's too much going on.
The effects are all over the place....
There is no flow either.

I like the colors tough.
I know you said that we shouldn't comment on the text but I just do it :p:
I would move it down a bit... I think that will look better.
Also I would create some lightning.

The effects are nice but as I already sais: There are too many of them ;)

Keep working at it :D

Alright thanks for the cnc, I agree with most of what you said too :D.

I didn't want to create another topic after I just posted this one, so how is this?

http://i35.tinypic.com/2vcj1w2.png

I personally like it :D.

hmm well it seems like in both of your tags, your trying hard to blend your render in with the background, you need to try to work on blending but not be so...extreme? idk how to word it, hopefully you understand what i mean, but if not i can try to re-word it, but work on a nice contrast with the foreground (in your case the render) and the background


also work on your typo, i dont think they work very well in both of your pieces, try using different fonts and putting them in other places in your tags...or dont use it at all, it might work better :)