Fantasy

BnW
http://i974.photobucket.com/albums/a...ntasy2-BnW.png

Normal:
http://i974.photobucket.com/albums/a...h/Fantasy2.png


CnC please?

I dono what those things are to the right of her but they look wierd. :p Text placement and the text itself could use some work, I would of positioned her and the effects a bit to the right, its too central for me. Then you could of put your text to the left without having to put it over the top of the effects. You have no real lightsource and the background is bit plain. The effects look nice though. :)

Better than it was before. I prefer the color version.

Too much border, make it skinnier, and more subtle.I prefer the color version, it could use a tiny bit more color overall though. Needs some more effects too, it's a little plain as is. It's a nice start though, you got some tight effects on here at current, it just needs a little more.

yeah I posted a question on how to fill it up and I didn't get much response >.>

So yeah any other tips would be nice