another abstract
This will be a collection of four works, there will be four basic elements, I started with water :)
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20..._by_mio188.jpg
H2O
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08-13-2010, 06:29 AMcc.mioH2O
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08-13-2010, 06:36 AMGallagher
Really good, all except the H2O text imo. Seems out of place and too simple for this type of piece.
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08-13-2010, 06:47 AMcc.mio
o yeah, my text sux always :D
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08-13-2010, 06:59 AMGallagherMy pleasure mate, looking forward to seeing the other elements.Quote:
Originally Posted by mio188
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08-13-2010, 11:28 AMScrib
Don't put text in pieces like this. Period. Unless you do some really awesome typography to fit it in. also, its looking really flat and monotone. Adding a foreground would make sense, this just looks like a bg with no focal or point of interest. keep working, youll get there eventually. :)
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08-13-2010, 05:08 PMcc.mio
no more text in abstract works.. :D
focal is supposed to be at the right side of the text, my eyes always goes there first, but you may have probably different feeling of this piece :)
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08-13-2010, 06:08 PMDerosion
It looks nice, it has that watery type of feeling :p.
Yeah, remove the text and that's a nice piece.
Kiu.
Join the club ;).Quote:
Originally Posted by mio188
