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Tbh, I wouldn't jump to adding C4D's at your level, no affence.
You have a wack load of colors.
Overall it looks very LQ.
The orange going around canvas looks bad, take that out.
Text looks bad too, probably because of the color.
Yeah man, not feeling this one. You need to coordinate your colors, you just have a lot of colors put together and they don't really coordinate.
Kiu.
Lq renders, the text is bad, no depth or lighting. But I guess GFXVoid can teach you all that.
thanks for the comments,
im trying to gain more experience and knowledge, this helps.