hayley williams vert tag

used a stock for this
and i did a vertical tag
i'm not good at either of the above 2 XD
cnc please
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...gx1/hayley.png
v2:
http://i167.photobucket.com/albums/u...1/hayleyv2.png

Needs more contrast, and needs to be brightened up a little. it's a little grayed out, but other than that, it's pretty tight.

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Originally Posted by Vicious Zen

Needs more contrast, and needs to be brightened up a little. it's a little grayed out, but other than that, it's pretty tight.

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what do you mean by contrast XD i'm anoob ;D
and i agree with the brightened up
and thanks xD

Yup as Zen said... Hayley needs some brightness.
And I think that the lightning source should be less bright :p
The lightning source is kinda the focal for me now.
If I look at the sig I then Hayley doesn't get my intention.
She not popping out enough IMO.

You've created a nice flow and I like the effects :)
I don't really like the colors... but I guess that's just my taste.
The lightning source has no effect on Hayley atm. Try to give the right side (for us) of her face some brightness and darken the left side a bit.

Keep working at it mate ;)

added a v2
better/worse?

You've added a second little lightning source... I would remove that.
I still think you need to town the brightness down a bit from the lightning source at her shoulder. Her face looks a bit purple... maybe you can fix that or something?
Keep working at it you're doing well :)

Alot of topaz :/. I'd tone that down a bit. Are those effects on her shirt and jeans part of the render itself? If not, then I would remove them or blend them in more. The light source as said, is not giving out much light. Kiu

there are some effects going over the face wich makes it dirty. only do effect on a face when it is like painted on the skin. the face is the main focus off your focal, and should be clean imo.

Oh Hayley Williams. Iyur. <3

Not a bad tag, I think you need to clean up the effects that are all over her though. I think you need to define some more flow too, there is some in there, just not enough in my opinion.

The top right corner with the bright yellow splurge, I think you need to blend it in with the rest of the tag more, it looks a bit messy there.

Not a bad tag though, I like the colours you've used, I like the compositon and I love Hayley Williams. :p

Keep it up. :)

Can you send me the stock please? :D

Hayley Williams <3

I like the colours and effects, although you should erase the effects covering her face.

ps. can you send me the stock too please :p