Aragorn

Felt like working on a larger canvas.

http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...iverpool11.png

Kinda plain, your stock feels very pasted on, I'd blend it in more, or do more with it. Feels really unfinished to be honest. Has potential though.

very empty
a lot of potential
bit too much topaz
but i love the text :D

First of all... its pretty overtopazed. Tone that down a bit.
I also think the lightning needs some work.
It looks like you have 2 lightning source's..
Look at the render and try to find out where the lightning is comming from. Then create one lightning source at the place it should be.

Also I think the blending needs some work.
Put some c4d's in front of aragon and it will look better...

I kinda like the text :)
And the effects behind him are looking pretty cool IMO.
Maybe add some adjustment layers so the colors match better with eachother.

Keep working at it.. cause as Zen said: It looks a bit unfinished ;)

Thanks guys, I thought the topaz was subtle, turned the settings down pretty low. :p

No Topaz:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...ornnotopaz.png

Thanks for all the comments/advice guys I'll try and add some more if I get some time later.

background is better but the render is not that good imo
but yes defo add some more too it

With the topaz it has to much. Without, it looks LQ.


The sig itself is very plain and dark kiu.

use topaz just not to much like v1 also as said jut use 1 light source other than that i like it text is sex