first tag in awhile

i'm not really good but constructive criticism will make me happy
i've never been good with text! so i'd love help with that!

http://i34.tinypic.com/2emzfow.jpg

Integrate your text in with your flow a little better, so it's not just sitting off to the side. Could use more colors, and more... well, something. It feels really unfinished.

I'm not sure what else I could add. I do understand about the text though. I'm really bad at it!

its quite empty but nice
maybe you do a bit of smudging or add some other effects
and agreed with above about text