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CnC!!!:D

the thing in the bg (top left) is distracting and ruins the flow. i'd get rid of it. Other than that superb job!!

bump

Yeh remove that thing near her head and on the top of her head is like a vertical line that looks really bad. SO get rid of those 2 things and you have a great sig

i agree

but nice effects

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Originally Posted by monori

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CnC!!!:D

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Not bad. Lighting and all is good, Decent flow (aside from the thing in the top left. You need to flatten that out, or blur it more, or something. It's too distracting) and I think if you're gonna have the stock's face be blue, it needs a little more blue overall to balance it out.

Good flow, lighting is superb, but the red smudging/ texture at the base of the sig looks a bit flat imo.

9/10