Okay, so I know I haven't really been commenting on any tags lately. Haven't had time, but I just busted this one out of nowhere, just before work, and I'd really like to get some CnC on it. Will go on a comment spree when I get back home though, I promise.
i really like the colour scheme of this tag, its very nice and matches, the focal is clear which is good, and the text isn't to noticeable which i think is nice, i dont like having noticeable text, maybe if i were to make a suggestion; decrease the canvas size because the left side is VERY empty, also i might topaz VERY little (very very little) just to clean it up a bit.
i like it~
08-23-2010, 05:27 PM
Dennis.
The effects are intresting, however it looks way too sharp, (the focal more than anything). I thinky you should tone it down a bit.
Another thing is that there is a lot of open and blank space on the left. Maybe add effects and crop it down. It might also look better with a border. Since it is extremely easy to make a border it wouldnt hurt to try it out. If it doesnt fit, you could easily take it off :)
Colour and flow are great, but the main problem for me is the emptyness of the left, compared to the right.
Keep it up
08-23-2010, 10:44 PM
Abstrakshin
Hmm, nice! The blur between the background effects and the displacement map on the left is a bit abrupt, but i mean it still works. You've got a distinct style, its pretty unique.
08-24-2010, 02:27 AM
Monroe
I think if you chop off 25% on the left it'll be dope.
08-24-2010, 02:53 AM
Xelo
i think the focal drowns in the effects and it's oversharpened. I don't like the colors, but that is personaly.
i definitely like the 2nd version more, but i think the border shouldn't have been that light of a colour, also i do think the 2nd version is better, but i still think 1st version being cropped would end up looking best, and as its already been said, that render is majourly over sharpened, or just a really crappy render, lol.
08-24-2010, 05:31 AM
Stiggeh
I love the effects I must say. :p
I just think that the effects are too much around the focal and not spaced out around the sig.
Good sig, but cropping it would help it a lot. :)