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You have a good selection of C4Ds, but it's a bit hard to see what's going on.

1st- Colours are a bit strong, but good flow.

2nd- The use of orange on a B&W tag doesn't look great, but the overall feel and depth is nice.

3rd- A strange scene, and not much work when it comes to colour, but the depth and flow looks decent.

thx but the 3rd is my signature,
not a part of the post,
i would like to hear another opinion...

i like your first the best, however i think you should get rid of the typo, it would look soooo much better, your c4d work in the first is pretty good, it would be a favorite if you got rid of the typo

the second one, i would get rid of the typo and get rid of that yellow soft brush, depth is looking nice there

thx
i really appreciate ur comment

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Originally Posted by excellence

i like your first the best, however i think you should get rid of the typo, it would look soooo much better, your c4d work in the first is pretty good, it would be a favorite if you got rid of the typo

the second one, i would get rid of the typo and get rid of that yellow soft brush, depth is looking nice there

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I agree about getting rid of the text. However I disagree about removing the yellow soft brush. It is a very nice effect on the signature and looks really good.

thx :) i agree with u too,
actually i made 2 versions for it 1 b&w normal and this one with the yellow brush i like the soft brush it looks good

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Originally Posted by iB :3

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Both very nice. The type on both is pretty weak though. The BG in the first one could use a little bit of texture to it. As for the second one, I feel like you should either drop the color, or add just a little bit more.

thx i'll try to get better