Kritez: Mr. West

Made this for the 2v2 Battle with JIC and the new members... people seemed to like it quite a bit.

I would love some critique though.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/482/kanyebandana.gif

Lemme know what you think.

I like it.
You should have done something more with the lightning.
I don't see a lightning source or something.
I really like the effects but the clipping mask (I guess it's clipping mask) makes it a bit too busy IMO.
I would remove some of them.
The blending looks cool. I think the colors are a bit boring.

Overall pretty nice sig.
Keep it up :)

its actually being included in the August Resource Pack, so you will see what i actually did, its not clipping mask ;)

On the first look I thought it was a floating head because everything has the same pattern. But its actually quite good. Try to make the shoulders a bit more clear so we see them. Also I agree with above.

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Originally Posted by Kritez

Made this for the 2v2 Battle with JIC and the new members... people seemed to like it quite a bit.

I would love some critique though.

http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/482/kanyebandana.gif

Lemme know what you think.

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Man this one is tight. Love the effects. Could use just a tiny bit more color, though.