Halo BnW

I think it's one of my bests so far XD

CnC please?


http://i974.photobucket.com/albums/a...sh/HaloBnW.png

Up the contrast and brightness a little to bring out the whites a bit better. Like the effects and such, good flow too. I'd drop the text though, or change it. It's not working here. The font is good, but I dunno about the black in that spot. How does it look white?
Overall good, little bit of tweaking would be great though.

ye it was originally white. But it is very hard to see. And I didn't know where else to put it, so I just made it small and close to the render.

Thanks for your comment. I'll see to that being fixed

BUMP

please comments

I don't think its your best right now, your sigs in your signature spot are lookin pretty good.

The borders are ok, I kinda like the cinematic borders but alot of pple hate them with a passion. The wireframe in the bg is workin ok, I would erase some of it on the upper left side of the wireframe that corner seems not neccesary. I like the bnw, but did you make it in color too? jc. The lighting is decent, but in the reflection of his helmet it appears there is a light source coming from in front of him. Maybe adding a light radial gradient map over the top of the head set to soft light or overlay bout 40% or so would help. Good job overall kiu.