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extra points for making a cartoon stock look so detailed.
Um, bit too much blank space, and the green background at the top should have a faint color glow on batman (is that batman?).
I am rather fond of what you did over his arm, especially in #2 with the lightening.
Perhaps the green on the right side is a bit too attention-grabbing? I dunno, it's a nice tone anyway.
I can tell that the light source is from about, but the render itself seems to be a little dark. I guess that's a part of being a ninja-superhero.
I've never thought of batman as someone who wears green, but this is unexpectedly good.
My favourite one is the second one, if only because it has the least blank space. Good work.
somehow you messed up the quallity. look at the eyes off the colord versions and compare them with the BW and the stock!
I like what youve done with the smudge effects here, very good job. My biggest complain is the composition and the color.
For something like this, your going to want a larger size sig, give yourself alittle more space to put that stock in and work with it.
You have a bright smudge spot on the right side of your sig... that spot takes away from your focal point... it draws the viewers eye away from your center stock (the dark knight itself). I would suggest keeping something similar to that smudge the same, but moving it under or closer to your stock.
For the colors... stick with what the stock gives you (Black, Blue, Cobalt, Grey). Simple as that.
Other than that i think you did a good job, kiu
alright i will try and mess with this a little more today and then re post the results on a new thread that ok or should i keep it on this thread ? And I'm glad u guys like it. tx again for your CNC .
ok hows this any better ?
http://a.imageshack.us/img833/7277/darkknight7new.png
tried to get the colors of the stock on this one .
http://a.imageshack.us/img833/1360/darkknight7color.png
did u guys like the changes made ? after the cnc ahh maybe i should of reposted this ?
I like the last green one but I think a bit too dark.
PS- Saved the stock XD
the second one looks much better. nice focal, good contrast. much better colors and composition.
goodwork
I like the direction you took there with the manipulation effects to the stock Sir'. It really shows you are trying new and different ideas with effects and overall composition. Even though the colors are fair and in between; I would have to say the 2nd original with the added light source is best in my opinion. It also is the only one that comes close to having any depth. The black and white one would be decent with some appropriate high lighting. The other ones you posted later on just too dark and over contrasted. They really tend to appear messy up top in the VERY bright spot there. But the effects used like around the arm/elbow look sweet. Keep it up man...
