Thinking

My newest pic, some tips?

http://i38.tinypic.com/dllwer.jpg


My stock:

http://i250.photobucket.com/albums/g...stocks/16m.png

wow i don't want to be the first to say this but here goes could use a bit more smudging.
render is hard to see with u text over top of it and the right side just doesn't look like it is quite fitting your piece here id try smudging in that area a bit more to flatten it out. kiu m8 and white boarder , i think look better with a black or color from your flowers on the left just imo

This is over contrasted and the text is a bit too big and takes away from the focal. You also have way too much empty space going on. Otherwise kiu.

Thanks for tips!
V2 with bit more smudging and other borders...

http://i36.tinypic.com/20uwzep.jpg