Assassin's creed grunge signature

I am trying to see my grunge signature.

What are you think CnC ??

http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/263/creed.jpg

http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/4683/creed2.jpg

Too bright and too dark, the contrast in it is harsh and needs to be reduced, also its a little small. i would almost consider it to be a very large avatar, but thats just me :D
It does seem a little basic but im sure you find there are ways to improve your skills and hone in on what you can to figure new techniques :)
Good luck with future tags and keep it up :D