Perfect world

http://www.plaatjesupload.nl/bekijk/...096972-280.jpg
CnC + rate :)
Thanks,

-Kylian

Text - BIG NO!
Lighting - Seems to not fit the flow, and the general thing seems too dark
General - Hectic

a bit blurry and the render looks slightly low quality.

I suggest working on your focal point and effects. The soft brush coloring is a bit much, i think you should lower the opacity a bit.

keep working mate :)